https://www.duolingo.com/LaLuzjesuis

Could somebody help me by checking my translation? Thanks :)

LaLuzjesuis
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A long way and much suffering are behind you now. I hope you can find in our city the peace and security, which you need to recover and to start new. While doing so we would like to help you. In addition to the social workers there are a lot of socially committed citizens in our town, who can help you with advice and practical help. Take the offer of our “Kleiderschrank” (clothing store) or the possibility to learn the german language. Take the opportunity to get in touch with the people in our health resort town while joining cultural events. If we get to know each other, we will understand each other! I wish you a peaceful stay in our town and all the best!

A good time wishes ...

Vor 3 Jahren

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Your translation is very good! As a native English speaker, I would say: "....to start anew." The word "German" should be capitalized. The phrase: "A good time wishes..." does not translate into anything an English speaker would understand. Perhaps: "Wishing you a good time..." is the proper choice here.

Vor 3 Jahren

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There were some minor changes that I made to your translation to make it clearer in American English. On the whole though, your translation was excellent and quite understandable. Keep up the good work!!

A long way and much suffering are behind you now. In our city, I hope you can find the peace and security that you need to recover and to start over. While you are doing that, we would like to help you. In addition to the social workers there are a lot of socially committed citizens in our town, who can give you advice and practical help. Take the offer of our “Kleiderschrank” (clothing store) or the possibility to learn the German language. Take the opportunity to get in touch with the people in our health resort town while participating in cultural events. If we get to know each other, we will understand each other! I wish you a peaceful stay in our town and all the best!

I wish you a good time ...

Vor 3 Jahren

https://www.duolingo.com/christian
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