Trong giao tiếp lần đầu thì các bạn có giới thiệu về bản thân của bạn và gia đình hay những thứ liên quan như sở thích...... Hãy viết bài ở đây cho mình và mọi người tham khảo để biết sao cho giới thiệu với người khác một cách tốt nhất nhé !
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hello, my name is hung, i am very happy when see you, i hope i do not bother you, i live in the .......... i am thirty year old, i work in the a big hospital so i know many people , my family live in the a small house but very warm, i love my wife and my children so i am very happy, i like to read book and play game with my children , toàn từ dễ thôi các bạn, đến đây là mình hết ý tưởng rồi
Thirty ??? I think " you are thirteen years old " Wow ! Surprise.... That is your future ???
Hi, boy. Good job! Keep moving! Give all my love to your wife and children. Hope your family all the best and will always be happy :) Now permit me to correct some errors from your paragraph to make it more completely. I hope I can help u a little. Thanks for reading my long comment
The first, the pronoun I is always capitalized, no matter it starts the sentence or not. You can get a reference for this here: "http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/capitalization/10-rules-of-capitalization.html". That error seems basic but it's so important.
And other errors such as "when" in "I am very happy when see u", "live" in "live in the...", "year old", "I work in the a big hospital", "the a small house", "I love my...so I am very happy", "like to"
To make them right, u can edit a little like this: "I am very happy to see u", "I am living in...", "years old", "in a small house", "I am working in/ work for a big hospital", " I love my wife as well as all my children a lot. I am so proud of them and feel myself lucky to have them in my life", "like reading book.." ^_^
Thanks again for reading. You're rock. ^_^
hi everyone who is reading this comment!!! My name is Thoa. I am a freshman of a university. I want to make a new friend with all members because i have just taken part in this online course. My viewpoint of this life can be described as: When life changes to be harder, change yourself to be stronger. Have a nice day!!!
My name is chi.I come from Viet Nam.I'm 11 years old..My family has 7 peoples,I love them so much.My habitat is so hot and modern.I learn in Doan thi diem secondary school!I'm a new student so I don't have any friends.I often stay at home in the day off and watch TV.My favourite TV program is Cinderella.I take part in Duolingo for 1 week.Every day,I work hard because I wish I could finish the English tree.I think I am happy,warm-heart and clever.My heros is Katy perry and Lady Gaga.They are Pop's queen and monstrous.
Hello everyone, My name is Thuan. And now, i am going to introduce my self to you. I was born in Cam Ranh, Khanh Hoa. My birthday is August, 18. And now i am 23 years old. I study in HCM univercity Industry of Information Technology. My free time, i usually listen to music or go to travel with my friend. Thanks you!