https://www.duolingo.com/bemk92

Chríochnaigh mé mo chrann

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(Corrected version) Yaay.

Fuair mé mo chead ulchabhán tar éis bliain amhain ag obair agus tá an dath óir ag gach duilleog i mo chrann (anois).

Go raibh maith agaibh ag gach duine san fhoireann Gaeilge, agus ag gach daoine atá ag cúidiú le daoine eile ar an bhfóram.

Bhí thaithí iontach í seo agus táim ag fanacht anois leis an gcrann nua.

(And now let those corrections be heard please, I know I must've made a couple of mistakes here.)


(Original) Chríoch mé mo chrann

Yaay.

Fuair mé mo ulchabhán céad tar éis bliain amhain na obair agus tá gach duilleog i mo chrann ór (anois).

Go raibh maith agaibh á gach daoine sa foireann Gaeilge, agus á gach daoine ag cuidiú lena daoine eile ar an fóram.

Bhí thaithí hiontach í anseo agus táim ag fanacht anois don chrann nua.

(And now let those corrections be heard please, I know I must've made a couple of mistakes here.)

3 years ago

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https://www.duolingo.com/heathermagoo
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☘☘☘ A golden Irish tree is no small accomplishment. ☘☘☘

Comhghairdeas leat!!! Laethanta saoire sona dhuit!

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and an origami congratulations crane for you. :D

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/bemk92
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Go raibh maith agat agus leathanta saoire sona dhuit freisin. :)

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/galaxyrocker

First off: Comhghairdeachas leat!

Now, corrections:

Chríochnaigh mé mo chrann

Fuair mé mo chéad ulchabháin tar éis bliana ag obair* ... i mo chrann óir (ór is a noun, not an adjective)

Go raibh maith ag gach duine sa(n) bhf(h)oireann Gaeilge agus ag gach duine atá ag cúidiú le daoine eile ar an bhf(h)óram

Ba thaithí iontach í seo agus tá mé ag fanacht leis an gcrann nua

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/bemk92
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Go raibh mile maith agat.

how then do I say that it's been precisely one year though?

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/bemk92
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Added the corrections, but left my original version in there as well. After all, I'm only a learner.

Have a lingot for your help.

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/galaxyrocker

Check it again. There's still some typos and stuff there. Also, I guess I should have been clearer:

It'd be san fhoireann in the standard, but I use Connacht Irish so it's sa bhfoireann. It wouldn't be san bhfoireann, though

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/bemk92
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Think I got them all now.

In your comment though, isn't it uLchabhán?

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/galaxyrocker

Yep. Changed it. Thanks for pointing that out.

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/Knocksedan

tá gach duilleog i mo chrann ór (anois).

This is one of those phrases that you might structure differently in Irish:

Tá dath an óir ar gach duilleog i mo chrann

It makes it clear that you're talking about mo chrann not mo crann óir.

(I don't know why there's a definite article in dath an óir - it's not used with other colours)

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/Knocksedan

(I don't know why there's a definite article in dath an óir - it's not used with other colours)

As galaxyrocker pointed out, ór is a noun, not an adjective, so dath órga is "a golden colour" whereas dath an óir is "the colour of gold" - either phrase should work.

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/Knocksedan

And one more thing that you missed from galaxyrockers notes - it's gach duine not gach daoine.

Maith thú!

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/bemk92
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Go raibh maith agat. Have a lingot for the help :)

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/Gymnastical
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The day has come! Since throughout your mission, you've cheered me on through mine and celebrated my accomplishments with me, here goes:

Gefeliciteerd (wrong language. I know)!!! I am without any other words to describe how excited I am for you

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/bemk92
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Dankjewel Maggie :)

3 years ago

https://www.duolingo.com/leathdhuine

Maith thú

3 years ago
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