Bate papo em Inglê sem precisar do Whatsapp. Describing a dream job.
When I was young, I wanted to be a singer, but as it wasn't possible, today I am a financial assistant.
For me it is a good job and pretty important, even though It is not as noble as a green job.
Now, my dream job is to be a Financial manager, I believe it would be very good to me because it is a well-paid job.
When I was young, I wanted to be a
singer (Professions are not capitalized) , but as
it wasn't possible/it didn't work out, today I am a financial assistant.
it is a good job and pretty important (one, too),
even though it is not as noble as a green job. (Try to avoid repetition by removing the second "important")
Now(sounds better in the beginning of the sentence, but it's really up to you) my dream job is
to be a
financial manager, I believe
it would be very good
to me because
it is a well-paid job/
one (Referring to the job itself, "one" helps to avoid repetition).
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Im not good at english, i speak french, i wanna learn english more and portugese! :)
my dream job is not to need work =) but, now i'm a student of masters.. i'm studying soil science
When I was more younger my dream was to be an astronaut, I would want to live in Mars, explore other galaxies and have a lot of aliens friends :) But now I'm happy in explore our world, it's a big world for we and have lots of nice places to visit.