Apparently "głodna" is a typo of "głodny", haha! Can I not be a girl anymore? T_T
If you're sure that's the only mistake in your sentence, obviously you should report it.
I used "to" in place of "więc" - it's often used for "so" in my circles
It's problematic... yeah, people can say that, but we think it's rather colloquial grammar.