Would "Mae'r stori amdanoch chi" be correct, just lessening the emphasis on who the story is about?
Yes that would be correct. Please report this sentence if you come across it again.
There's nothing to report, I was just wondering whether the word order was strictly fixed or not. Thank you!
You can use mae in the middle? I thought you had to use ydy/yw for bod verbs outside of initial position.