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Hi everyone! I'm wondering if this sentence here: "Elle est folle, la premiere chose qu'elle a fait hier quand elle est revenu etais hurler et cries avec papa!" needs any corrections made to it. I am trying to say, "She is crazy, the first thing she did when she came home yesterday was scream and yell with dad." If so, let me know and tell me if it sounds French at all. Thanks everyone! :)

June 12, 2016

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https://www.duolingo.com/BonBonChat

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June 12, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/Sitesurf

There are several errors in this sentence.

Elle est folle, la première chose qu'elle a faite hier, quand elle est rentrée a été de hurler et de crier avec Papa

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/Mr.Quizzical

Is that subjunctive tense? When do you use subjunctive tense?

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/KolonelSpons

Hey, it's cow-owl again! Love that avatar :D Just to answer your query, there's no subjunctive either in the original sentence or in Sitesurf's corrected version.

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/Mr.Quizzical

I stand corrected. The que part which made me think it was subjunctive.

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/KolonelSpons

Good thinking, anyway.

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/Zyriel

OMG, I love your avatar. Where does cow-owl come from?

June 18, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/mirandaswift18

Elle est folle. la premiere chose qu'elle a fait quand elle est revenue a la maison hier, elle était crier avec papa.

I would keep the first part but revenue needs an e because it is using etre as a helper verb so it has to agree. I would also play around with the word order at the end to make more sense. I tried to show you a new way.

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/Fanny-nini38

Aaah french langage is so difficult! May i propose you this translation: Elle est folle, la première chose qu'elle a fait hier quand elle est revenue (or "quand elle est rentrée à la maison") était de crier et d'hurler avec papa. It is necessary to use "de" or "d'" before the translation of scream and yell. I hope i helped you. ;D

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/Sidedish333

Thank you everyone for your responses!!! :)

June 13, 2016

https://www.duolingo.com/Danieloneil10

hi people i love duolingo it is so much fun!

June 15, 2016
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