Order of words: why it is in't good? בתוכנו יש מים
It is OK
becase "יש מים בתוכנו" is what we say (we dont... donno why duo say that)
בתוכנו יש מים its ok but its a littel... um... somthing that old ppl say
(I hope you don't mind if I correct your spelling).
Little. Don't know (slang/teenagers: Dunno). Something.
Also, apostrophes: Don't (= Do not).
Thanks for the Hebrew help!