What a weird way of saying this sentence in English!! Sounds "too foreign"!
Could you please suggest a more natural translation? Or at least point out at the words that are particularly wrong?
I think the word "guy" is a bit out of context here, it's too colloquial and used more like "чувак". І'm not a native speaker, but fluent enough for it to sound unnatural to me too :) I think "boy" would be better here.
Agreed, guy is too colloquial. Boy would be more suitable. Especially since we don't know how old the people are. You wouldn't typically call a young fella (younger than 12 or so) a "guy"
Native English speaker