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A simple french story

je ne sais pas comment a francais tres bien mais je veut aux bonne. ceci pourquoi j'ecris ceci. Donc comment est francais pour leurs lisent ce. je sais il mauvais mais c'est d'accord. j'ai travail a parle et ecrive car je veux parler bien. c'est mon premiere story. Si comprend cela, Bonne Si pas mon muavaise, mais echante a post ceci. Qu'est-ce que tu pense

please correct if you see my flaws with added advice merci beaucoup

February 19, 2017

8 Comments


https://www.duolingo.com/BonBonChat

A great place to also post this would be lang-8.com where you can post things in your target language and have NATIVE speakers correct it!

February 19, 2017

https://www.duolingo.com/JJPAUL0

thanks man

February 20, 2017

https://www.duolingo.com/DenisBouch7

I understand your comment! It may not be perfect, but you have communicated in French. Nice!

February 20, 2017

https://www.duolingo.com/Merrowmic

Je ne sais pas comment [de parler] français très bien, mais je veu[x] [fragment].

[C'est] pourquoi j'écris ceci.

Donc, comment est [mon] français pour [ceux qui] lisent ce [texte?].

Je sais [que ce n’est pas bon], mais c'est d'accord.

Je [suis en train de travailler et de parler et d’écrire] car je [voudrais] parler bien.

C'est [ma première histoire].

Si [vous comprenez] cela, [bon]. [Sinon], [fragment].

Qu'est-ce que [vous en pensez]?

This was the best I could do from what you wrote.

February 20, 2017

https://www.duolingo.com/JJPAUL0

thanks man

February 20, 2017

https://www.duolingo.com/RandomTed

You made mistakes. But I did understand what you were saying.

February 20, 2017

https://www.duolingo.com/JJPAUL0

really that makes me feel successful

February 20, 2017

https://www.duolingo.com/Surnomax

sorry i don't understand your french, try to write this text in english, i think i'll understand better

February 20, 2017
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