"If he had danced nicely, he would have got gift"
Translation:Angalicheza vizuri angalipata zawadi
again awkward. I don't mean to be rude but it appears you need someone who is a perfectly bilingual English/Swahili speaker.
Of the three course contributors for Swahili, I believe there is one native speaker of English and two native speakers of Swahili. The native English speaker is working on fixing these awkward sentences, but it definitely helps when you report. (Of course, if you know any other native English speakers who are fluent in Swahili, you can encourage them to apply to contribute!)