Any tips you can give me to help me in my German?
Your question is pretty broad. If you narrow it down to the one or two things giving you the hardest time, you'll probably get multiple responses.
Hi! Since your discussion post doesn't relate to Duolingo/language in general, would you mind moving your post to the German for English speakers forum? That way, more people who are learning German from English will be able to give better responses.
Also, here's a short and detailed guide explaining which forum to post your discussion in: