Translation:因为我不喜欢水，所以我不游泳。
The English is actually Chinglish!
Couldn't we omit 因为 here?
Is it incorrect to exclude the second 我?
And could we also omit the second 我?
can you omit 因为 or 所以? they are both necessary?
I assume that 所以 can be dropped
This English is a little awkward. Flipping the clauses sounds better.
