"Because I don't like water, I don't swim."

Translation: 因为我不喜欢水，所以我不游泳。

[Naasei]

The English is actually Chinglish!

[XiaoAn4]

Couldn't we omit 因为 here?

[SusieODrangus]

Is it incorrect to exclude the second 我?

[XiaoAn4]

And could we also omit the second 我?

[PIEROS16]

can you omit 因为 or 所以? they are both necessary?

[Aria_patriot]

I assume that 所以 can be dropped

[Mokuhazush]

This English is a little awkward. Flipping the clauses sounds better.