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What do you think of my poem?

Here's a french poem that I wrote just for fun. What do you think?

La Pluie, Tu Dis un poeme


Il pleut vraiment? tu dis mais, oui! mon ami et le ciel est.. oui? tu dis le ciel, je pense, le ciel est gris

et quoi d'otre, mon ami? simplement, le ciel est gris?


as you can tell I'm not done beacause I can't think of any other rhymes. any suggestions?

January 9, 2018

12 Comments


https://www.duolingo.com/GrosNain85

you made a small mistake. it is not "quoi d'otre" but "quoi d'autre". if not it is good.

January 9, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/le_tra-jeudi

oh thanks

January 11, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/XxAriaxX

Ohhh I like it!But I'm bad at rhyming so I'm not gonna be much help.Sorry! But It did make sense to me.Good luck!

January 9, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/carptoon

Hi le_tra-jeudi Here's a tip for coming up with rhymes. (1) write down a list of the appropriate alphabet include dipthongs. like bl and br. (2) pick a short word and find words by pronouncing a potential rhyming with each letter For example in English if I wanted a word to rhyme with stack. with a list that starts b br bl c cl cr d dr dl f fr fl I get words like - back - black - crack ... sack slack shack tack track etc.
Regards, Carptoon

January 9, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/le_tra-jeudi

oh I'm sorry it doesn't let me enter seperate paragraphs. I'll rewrite it so it's clearer.

Il pleut. ~ vraiment? tu dis. ~ mais, oui! mon ami. ~ et le ciel est.. ~ oui? tu dis. ~ le ciel, je pense, ~ le ciel est gris <sub> </sub> et quoi d'otre, mon ami? ~ simplement, le ciel est gris?

January 9, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/garpike

Double space + carriage return = line-break.
Double space + two carriage returns = paragraph-break.

January 9, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/le_tra-jeudi

line
break

paragraph

break

January 11, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/BashaBelan

hihihihhiihihihihihihihihihhihihihihih

January 11, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/BashaBelan

hey

January 11, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/le_tra-jeudi

hi

January 13, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/le_tra-jeudi

i wrote this three months ago. now i know better, but no one corrected me.

"poeme" is FEMININE.

May 4, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/le_tra-jeudi

and, of course, has an accent. but im too lazy to put it there

May 4, 2018
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