What do you think of my poem?
Here's a french poem that I wrote just for fun. What do you think?
La Pluie, Tu Dis un poeme
Il pleut vraiment? tu dis mais, oui! mon ami et le ciel est.. oui? tu dis le ciel, je pense, le ciel est gris
et quoi d'otre, mon ami? simplement, le ciel est gris?
as you can tell I'm not done beacause I can't think of any other rhymes. any suggestions?
you made a small mistake. it is not "quoi d'otre" but "quoi d'autre". if not it is good.
Ohhh I like it!But I'm bad at rhyming so I'm not gonna be much help.Sorry! But It did make sense to me.Good luck!
Here's a tip for coming up with rhymes. (1) write down a list of the appropriate alphabet include dipthongs. like bl and br. (2) pick a short word and find words by pronouncing a potential rhyming with each letter For example in English if I wanted a word to rhyme with stack. with a list that starts b br bl c cl cr d dr dl f fr fl
I get words like - back - black - crack ... sack slack shack tack track etc.
oh I'm sorry it doesn't let me enter seperate paragraphs. I'll rewrite it so it's clearer.
Il pleut. ~ vraiment? tu dis. ~ mais, oui! mon ami. ~ et le ciel est.. ~ oui? tu dis. ~ le ciel, je pense, ~ le ciel est gris <sub> </sub> et quoi d'otre, mon ami? ~ simplement, le ciel est gris?
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i wrote this three months ago. now i know better, but no one corrected me.
"poeme" is FEMININE.