我 am a english learner, I like writing, write anything :)
our world is silent
our eyes are blazing in the darkness
the moment, his mouth opens:
"what's up, man?"
I such said: "the heaven, man! and God!"
'the moment, his mouth gets open:'
maybe try, 'the moment he opens his mouth' or 'the moment his mouth opens' there is no need for the gets!
i love it! its very good! keep writing more!
“我不会说汉语好” 应该是 “我的汉语不好”or“我的汉语不是很好”
因为 “不会说汉语”=“cannot say chinese”，它没有【程度】
也许你可以说“我不会 很好地 说汉语”，这样就没有语法错误，但很不常见
希望能帮到你，thank your reply :)
It's great! It should be "mouth gets open." The word "such" doesn't belong in the last line. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Very thank you doesn't make sense. You could say "thank you very much" or just "thank you", but very thank you is incorrect.
Quick correction, djeatonlisbon. "His mouth opens" is correct, "mouth gets open" is not.
thank you, your grammar is right!
and there is a more simplified statement:"这是一首好诗"!
you have great humour!!!! i like it! (cant work out how to do chinese on this thing)
"you have great humour, i like it!" = “你很幽默，我喜欢！”
humour = 幽默
thank you my friend, have a good day (*ﾟ▽ﾟ)ﾉ
hello 姜小虎，I am a English learner. your Chinese is good, I received your means. but “他家好”(ta jia hao) is wrong, I think that maybe your means is "hello everyone" = “大家好”(da jia hao)
and “有人要学习英语 [ 还是 ] 希腊语吗？” shall be “有人要学习英语 [ 或者 ] 希腊语吗？”
because “还是” depends [ must exist for only one ], but they may learn 英语 or 希腊语, may learn 英语 and 希腊语, may not learn all, so you need use "或者" or “或”
and “我可以一起练习” shall be “我们可以一起练习”.
我们 = we, 我 = I
have a good one