English practice, I wrote a poem :)
thy silence is most profound music,
thy wisdom like stars in the sky.
in the breeze under the moon,
thy darkness made me understand what is light.
so, silent night, please accept my love.
Beautiful! All these poems coming forth are inducing upon me the will to want to write a French one.
Though it's already been commented,the first word that comes to mind after reading this is 'beautiful' and i especially liked the 4th line.You keep improving with every poem.
Looking forward to more of your work. :)
Two small things: the first full stop should be a comma, otherwise the second line becomes a sentence without a verb. You probably also want to put a comma after 'so', to make it clear that you are addressing the silent night.
not related, but I'm just wondering. Are you in every language course here?! Massive props if you are :)
I have a better poem:
Roses are red
Weed is green
I'm moving to Colorado
If you know what I mean
Well done! I am a native English speaker and I understood perfectly what you wrote! You are an amazing poet! Keep up the good work :)