https://www.duolingo.com/A-Self

English practice, I wrote a poem :)

thy silence is most profound music,

thy wisdom like stars in the sky.

in the breeze under the moon,

thy darkness made me understand what is light.

so, silent night, please accept my love.

November 29, 2018

19 Comments


https://www.duolingo.com/JackMartian

Beautiful! All these poems coming forth are inducing upon me the will to want to write a French one.

November 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/A-Self

To try, friend! you will fall in love with expression.

November 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/Bluebubble2018

Though it's already been commented,the first word that comes to mind after reading this is 'beautiful' and i especially liked the 4th line.You keep improving with every poem.

Looking forward to more of your work. :)

November 30, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/A-Self

thank you! 很高兴你能喜欢

December 1, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/garpike

Two small things: the first full stop should be a comma, otherwise the second line becomes a sentence without a verb. You probably also want to put a comma after 'so', to make it clear that you are addressing the silent night.

November 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/A-Self

thank your advice! you really understood my mind, I need that!

November 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/SpiritAnim6

not related, but I'm just wondering. Are you in every language course here?! Massive props if you are :)

November 30, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/PolyglotCiro

I have a better poem:

Roses are red
Weed is green
I'm moving to Colorado
If you know what I mean

December 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/LittlemissLia

This one is my favorite so far! 干得好!

November 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/A-Self

nice to meeting you, 很高兴你能喜欢 :)

November 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/ABIGAILQUI4775

Beautiful!

November 29, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/SpiritAnim6

Well done! I am a native English speaker and I understood perfectly what you wrote! You are an amazing poet! Keep up the good work :)

November 30, 2018

https://www.duolingo.com/A-Self

thank you !

December 1, 2018
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