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I'm to want try to tell a history that i read the last The count of Mont cristo.
Edmundo was young, and he would to marriage with Mercedes, this later that he did came back of a trip of chip, now he did will be a capter of the chip.
but your friend is very angry with Edmundo, because he wanted to be the capter. Than he give a way to send edmundo for the prision of castle. where only could stay enimy of the king. Now edmundo was alone on the etern prision, he did will stay crasy there, but in one morning he hear a noise on the ground, and a stone of the floor opened. A old man appear, he did was to try go way of the prision. but this go wrong.
So the two men to be friend, and the outher tell for edmund about a tesore of monte cristo. whan they go ways of prision, they going to be rick, bus this not happed, because the old man deaded. So Edmond did has a idea, he enter on the bag of the dead, and to get to leave the prision.
He came back to your home and look for the tesoury and marriage with Mercedes and your enimy alread leave the country, because of the king Napoleao. So Edmund and Mercedes to live happy for always.
Sorry for my english, if someone want to correct me, i'll stay very happy, if someone could undestand it, because I did do it outwiht tranlator. somebody alread read this book or movie? tell me please! Se you later! Thank you!
"I want to try and tell a story that I read recently, the Count of Monte Cristo. Edmund was young, and he wanted to marry Mercedes, after he came back from a voyage on a ship, when he would be the captain. But his friend was angry with him because he wanted to be captain.
He found a way to send Edmund to a castle prison, where he would stay as an enemy of the king. Edmund was alone in the prison and he was going crazy there, but one day he heard a noise on the ground and a floor stone opened. An old man appeared. He had been trying to get out of the prison, but had gone the wrong way. So the two men became friends, and the other told Edmund about the treasure of Monte Cristo. When they got out if prison they would be rich. But this did not happen because the old man died.
Edmund had an idea. He got into the bag with the dead man, and so managed to get out of the prison.
He went back to his home to look for the treasure and marry Mercedes. His enemy had already left the country, because of the emperor Napoleon. And Edmund and Mercedes "lived happily ever after".
But not before Edmund had taken revenge on all those people he felt had wronged him.
(Mas não antes de Edmund se vingar de todas aquelas pessoas que ele achava que o haviam prejudicado - Google)
OK para não usar o traductor, é geralmente fácil a entender, mas precisa prestar atenção a ortografia, às formas passadas, e às formas de possessivos. :)
É um dos meus livres favoritos, especialmente a segunda parte, onde ele se vinga.
Thank you so much, for help me!!
The book that I readed is in elementary level, then it is very resume, don't had the part that he taken revenge. but I also heared the original story. My sister reade and tell me, It is a book much long, bui I don't liked it so much of the end, because Edmund taken revenge untel of Mercedes and him son, that in story he no was him.
In my opnion, the movie was more cool, he revenge only of your enemy.
Sim, é um livro muito legal, principalmente quando ele volta e vinga do seu falso amigo e das outras pessoa que o prejudicaram.
Realmente eu escrevi um pouco sem atenção, depois da correção é possível ver isso claramente, e também até hoje não sei como usar o "passado" o "futuro" e as "possessões", na verdade eu preciso estudar muito, porque é tudo muito confuso pra mim ainda. Mas espero um dia chegar lá :). Mais uma vez agradeço pela correção, tenha um ótimo dia!