"This evening is cold." is much more correct.
This just sounds wrong in English.
Senja is dusk
It's valid English. It just sounds like an old poem. Maybe tomorrow evening here in Northern California, while checking the surf at dusk, I'll say, "Friends, this dusk is cold! But let's surf anyway!"
"Valid" !? it is poor English, period.
Petang itu malam menjelang sore. Kurang cocok rasanya pakai dusk
senja is the more usual BI for dusk