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https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

私は日本語を終えました I have finished Japanese

彼女は日本語を話しているので、私は私の素晴らしいいとこと一緒に勉強しています。私が彼女に会ったとき、彼女は韓国語を学びたいと思った、そして私は日本語を学びたいと思った。それで私達は約7つのマウントのために一緒に勉強しています、そして私はとても幸せです、そして彼女もそうです。私たち二人ともそこでサポーターについて考えたいのです。それがあなたのためでなければ、私はそれをあきらめようとしたでしょう。しかし、最も重要なことは人生を決してあきらめないことです!

Kanojo wa nihongo o hanashite irunode, watashi wa watashi no subarashī itoko to issho ni benkyō shite imasu. Watashi ga kanojo ni atta toki, kanojo wa Kankoku-go o manabitai to omotta, soshite watashi wa nihongo o manabitai to omotta. Sorede watashitachi wa yaku 7tsu no maunto no tame ni issho ni benkyō shite imasu, soshite watashi wa totemo shiawasedesu, soshite kanojo mo sōdesu. Watashitachi futari tomo sokode sapōtā ni tsuite kangaetai nodesu. Sore ga anata no tamedenakereba, watashi wa sore o akirameyou to shitadeshou. Shikashi, mottomo jūyōna koto wa jinsei o kesshite akiramenai kotodesu!

January 10, 2019

31 Comments


https://www.duolingo.com/profile/steve817862

I think it's great that you are trying to write in Japanese and I encourage you to keep it up. I just want to give a few suggestions. Based on your vocabulary, I think you can handle it. :-)

彼女は日本語を話しているので、私は私の素晴らしいいとこと一緒に勉強しています。 My wonderful cousin and I are studying together because she is speaking Japanese.

The wording is a bit awkward and repetitive. You don't have to say ”私は私の”。 Just ”私の”。I think you might be trying to say: 私のすばらしいいとこはすでに日本語を話せるから、一緒に勉強しています。

私が彼女に会ったとき、彼女は韓国語を学びたいと思った、そして私は日本語を学びたいと思った。 When I met her, she thought I want to study Korean, then I thought I want to study Japanese.

You need quotation marks around the thoughts. If you are not quoting, then you need to make the time the same throughout, just like in English.

初めて合ったときに、彼女は ”朝鮮語を習いたい” と思ったが、私は ”日本語を習いたい” と思ったのです。 。。。とか 初めて合ったときに、彼女は朝鮮語を習いたかったが、私はにほんごを学びたかったと思いました。

それで私達は約7つのマウントのために一緒に勉強しています、そして私はとても幸せです、そして彼女もそうです。 With that, for the purpose of about 7 mounts (?) we are studying, (7 months?) then I am very happy, then she is (too). You can't put a comma after a verb that has been conjugated with ~ます or ~ました. That ending marks the end of the sentence. So this is three sentences, not one.

それでは、7ヵ月の勉強の後で幸せになりました。

私たち二人ともそこでサポーターについて考えたいのです。 This sentence doesn't make any sense and is not translatable. But based on your other comment that you want people to support you, I think you are trying to say 私たちの二人は手伝ってくれようにお願いします or something like that.

それがあなたのためでなければ、私はそれをあきらめようとしたでしょう。 But if not for your sake, I would have given up on that.

しかし、最も重要なことは人生を決してあきらめないことです! However, the most essential thing is to never give up on life!

It's a little dramatic and over the top. Perhaps 生活の中には、しっかり頑張らなければ、いけないのですさ!

さあ!よく頑張ってね!

January 12, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Thank you so much for the suggestions!

January 12, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Chaos_Hawk

Translation for those not that far yet (based on my limited knowledge and Google Translate's help):

Since my cousin speaks Japanese, I am studying with her. When I met her, she wanted to learn Korean, and I wanted to learn Japanese. So, we are studying together for about seven months. I am very happy, and she is as well. We both want to think about supporters there. If it was not for you, I would have given up. But the most important thing to remember is to never give up in life!

Not perfect but good enough. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong on something :P

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/zxkjack123

I think the "彼女" here means "girlfriend" but not cousin. But you still did a good job bro!

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Well thanks and by the way I am a girl :D lol

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Good so far but where it says " We both want to think about supporters there" it supposed to say " We both would like supporters here"

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Chaos_Hawk

Ah, I thought that part sounded weird. Thanks for the correction.

January 11, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Np

January 11, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Emulatronic

I have the feeling you are abusing 私 a lot. In Japanaese you don't use the subject unless there is a clear doubt about it.

Anyways, おめでとう!

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Thanks!

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/mapaity

I do not understant

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/UNSTOPABBLE

lol

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Mike899735

Try to copy and paste to Google translate, it's not perfect but will enable you to understand most of what he wrote in Kana.

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/therealscamp

hey congrats :D that's really cool!

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Thank you

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Kamil125794

日本語がはなせません。w

January 11, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

あなたは話さないでしょう?

January 11, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/_Nemesis_

This is really cool, I noticed that some people act like it takes a year or longer to be able to keep up with a conversation, but I have noticed that with the help of a few other sources most users have finished this in under a year. Pretty inspiring to keep learning and good luck with your further studies.

January 13, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Thank you so much. And so with you. To learn Japanese it only took me about 5-6 months

January 13, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/PracticalLesson

おめでとう !

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

ありがとう

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Mike899735

おめでとうございます

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

ご親切にありがとうございました!!

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Thomas_Wesley

Well done! Looks like your skills have advanced beyond Duo's Japanese course...

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Yeah lol...

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/zxkjack123

おめでとう!

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

Thnks

January 10, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/SimonSaysHi

おめでとう!日本へ行きたい?

January 14, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

あなたがすべき。それは素晴らしい場所です。私は4週間前に行きました。

January 15, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/SimonSaysHi

日本に住んでいるよ笑 どこに行くだった?

January 15, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/YoongMin-Life

私は小さな頃から行っています。私は旅行するのが大好き

January 15, 2019
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