Does this make sense?
Decided I had learnt quite a lot so far so decided to make a weird sentence :D. Does this make sense: Ella tiene un madre pero no padre. Ellos comen una manzana para desayuno y carne cuando ellos somos hambre.
The first sentence looks good. On the second, you have a problem with somos. First, the conjugation is wrong. You used the conjugation for nosotros rather than ellos. Ellos son. However, that is the wrong word to use. Hambre actually means hunger. So in Spanish you say have hunger rather than are hungry. Ellos tienen hambre.