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Rammstein - Sonne - in High Valyrian

Rytsas,
inspired by the "Never Gonna Give You Up" cover in High Valyrian (you can find it on Youtube), I translated the lyrics of the song "Sonne" by the band "Rammstein" into HV. I thought it might sound nice. And maybe I get the chance to even record it in the next couple days, but not sure.
But anyway I want to show you the text and I would be very happy if you guys can spot any mistakes or have other suggestions. I always like to here them.
Here is a link to an instrumental version for singalong: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQ8XhaNj83g

[Intro]
one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, end/out
mēre, lanta, hāre, izula, tōma, bȳre, sīkuda, jēnqa, vōre, mōris

[Vers 1]
everyone is waiting for the enchantment
tolvys jumbas sēteror
be afraid, don't be afraid
zūgātās, zūgagon daor
the sun is shining from my eyes
vēzos hen ñuhī laehoti jehikas
it will not set tonight
mazilībilus daor bantī
the men count to ten
va ampa ūnis vali

[Refrain]
one, now the sun is coming
mēre, sīr vēzos amāzis
two, now the sun is coming
lanta, sīr vēzos amāzis
three, it is everyones most white star
hāre, tolvo timpāje qēlos issa
four, now the sun is coming
izula, sīr vēzos amāzis

[Vers 2]
the sun is shining from my hands
vēzos hen ñuhī ondoti jehikas
it can burn your eye
jevi laes zālagon kostas
when it breaks out of the hands
skorī hen ondoti pryjas
it sits burning on the face
laehurlio bē zālarī dēmas
it will not set tonight
mazilībilus daor bantī
the men count to ten
va ampa ūnis vali

[Refrain]
one, now the sun is coming
mēre, sīr vēzos amāzis
two, now the sun is coming
lanta, sīr vēzos amāzis
three, it is everyones most white star
hāre, tolvo timpāje qēlos issa
four, now the sun is coming
izula, sīr vēzos amāzis
five, now the sun is coming
tōma, sīr vēzos amāzis
six, now the sun is coming
bȳre, sīr vēzos amāzis
seven, it is everyones most white star
sīkuda, tolvo timpāje qēlos issa
eight, nine, now the sun is coming
jēnqa, vōre, sīr vēzos amāzis

[Vers 3]
the sun is shining from my hands
vēzos hen ñuhī ondoti jehikas
it can burn your eye
aōhi laes zālagon kostas
when it breaks out of the hands
skorī hen ondoti pryjas
it sits on your face
aōho laehurlio bē dēmas
it sits hurting on the chest
naejo bē dēmas ōdrarī
you lose your protection
ojughā aōhi mīsvī
and now you know you lost
sesīr ojūdā gīmī
the men count to ten
va ampa ūnis vali

[Refrain]
one, now the sun is coming
mēre, sīr vēzos amāzis
two, now the sun is coming
lanta, sīr vēzos amāzis
three, it is everyones most white star
hāre, tolvo timpāje qēlos issa
four, and will never fall from the sky
izula, se hen jēdār dōrī ropēlza
five, now the sun is coming
tōma, sīr vēzos amāzis
six, now the sun is coming
bȳre, sīr vēzos amāzis
seven, it is everyones most white star
sīkuda, tolvo timpāje qēlos issa
eight, nine, now the sun is coming
jēnqa, vōre, sīr vēzos amāzis
(out!/end!) - only in music video version
(mōris)

April 5, 2019

4 Comments


https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Xenon-

Sȳrpirī va moriot! But what about the verbs not in the end? Is it for rhythm?

April 6, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/tim981145

Kirimvose. Yes sometimes I put the verb not at the end, so that it rhymes. But I heard, despite the free word order, that verbs always have to go to the end. But not sure about that. What do you think? Can verbs also move around freely in the sentence?

April 6, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Shelley544789

Kirmvose, naena! I love this!!!

April 11, 2019

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/tim981145

Olvī kirimvose :D

April 11, 2019
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