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İELTS için ilk essay denemem hatalarım nedir ve 9 üzerinden kaç alır bu

normalde ena z 150 kelime olucak şekilde yazmak istedim, ama kaç kelime olmuştur bilmiyorum 150 oldumu geçtimi bakmadım, benim hedefim 9 üzerinden 6 almak bilemedim 5 ve bu ilk denemem

What is the limits should there be for genetic engineering of humans please explain briefly,,,,,,,,

Genetic engeering is a beneficial scientific branch for the human health, Genetic engineering is too crude branch at the science but already it is did to much way about the human cures, but there is some opposite side to this branch, although this science is so beneficial for human health, this science branch have also some risk on the human health, medical sicience about cure of the human body but genetic engeering have also ability to chance the human body and it,s genetic, this point is making the genetic engeering dissimilar then other medical science branchs, this point so important because this is so new thing for all of us and the all of the medical science,and other scienists, we must know what is the propose of this new branch of medicial, is the purpose of genetic engeering improve the human ? is this a upgrade of the human,s genetic ? or a treatment for health of human ? this three question is so significant for opponent scientists and of course for patients. This scientific branch have a opposition and supporter group ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, some doctors says, genetic experiments are so dancerous for humanity, also some doctors says, this experiments could be so useful for medical researches,in scientific world there is positive and negative opinions, we have to listen the possitive and negative opinions,because we can not ingore this risks but same timewe can not the ignore of this science and we should not making block for it,s progression, this can a be big mistake, we have to understand and we have to comprehend, both side of this debate. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, but on my opnion, genetic engeering is helpful but if that not controled that can be hazard for humanity health, i think genetic experiments would have a tightly control mechanisim, because this preventions is so necessary for goodness of the humanity, this way is safety and this way have a compromise amongst two side. think genetic engeering is not a modification for humans,it is can resolve the most diffucult diseases, but always it is need a good control mechanism in this way, especially nowadays because it is so crude and it is have there are many ways to go.

July 26, 2019

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