we want to apply there to be student는 안되나요?

That will be "우리는 학생이 되기 위해 그곳에 지원하고 싶습니다" I think it is quite different

we want to apply to be student there. there는 문장의 끝에이야 돼요 (한국어 실수 있다면 미안해요)

앞의 We 때문에 students 가 되는것 같아요

We would like to apply to be students there.

Students 복수형태가 맞나요?

We want to apply to be a student there. 로 Student가 맞지 않아요 ?

we는 복수니까 student가 복수가 되서 students가 맞습니다 !

We want to apply to be their students는 안되나요?

apply for its students

we'd like to apply to be your student

We wanna apply to be students there.

We want to apply to be students there

We want to apply to be students there.

We would like to apply to become a student there 이게 틀리나요?

아렵군

... to be the students there는 왜 안되는거죠? ㅠㅠ

the는 빼고, 돼요