Can I get a Tier 4 or up translation check?
Can't move up the levels unless someone checks my work! Corrections appreciated! :)
I was having issues with the wording on this one and would appreciate corrections.
I went through the first one for you. A few corrections, but overall it was pretty good.
I went through the second one for you. I had a number of corrections, but they were mostly small. A few things were idiomatic usage, some specific to astrology, I think. You have a little bit of awkward wording in English that I didn't correct if I didn't think it was related to the translation. But you might want to go over it again with an eye for smoothness in English.
Yeah... My main issue with translation is that I know what it means, but I don't know how to say it. My English has suffered a lot with my last job haha thanks again for going through it. :)