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Если кто может исправить ошибки если они присутсвуют или перефразировать, буду очень благодарен. Вот моё сочинение: My favorite author Dale Carnegie says: "The successful man will profit from his mistakes and try again in a different way." I want to speak about mistakes in our life and its value. What was a profit from mistakes? Anybody wants to be successful, all of us wants to make progress, but nobody wishes to make a mistake. Because of fear, the fear of failure, “what if things don’t work out”? We’re taught in school, in our families, or at work to feel guilty about failure and to do whatever we can to avoid mistakes. You can only learn from a mistake after you admit you’ve made it. As soon as you start blaming other people (or the universe itself) you distance yourself from any possible lesson. But if you courageously stand up and honestly say “This is my mistake and I am responsible” the possibilities for learning will move towards you. Wise people admit their mistakes easily. They know progress accelerates when they do. A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new. Albert Einstein In my opinion life is a scary place if it is made safe only by never getting into trouble, never breaking the rules and never taking the risks that hearts tell is need to take.

3 года назад

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https://www.duolingo.com/ns_shadow

"its value" - это ведь про ошибки, не про жизнь? Наверное, множетвенное число надо.

What was a profit from mistakes? - почему прошедшее время? Вроде , все остальное сочинение - в настоящем :) К тоиу же посмотрела, если не ошибаюсь, выражение "profit from" используется с глаголом "profit", а не с существительным.

Anybody wants to be successful - тут должно быть everybody или everyone...

3 года назад

https://www.duolingo.com/Jamflipp
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"all of us wants" вроде здесь множественное число, так что all of us want

3 года назад

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Спасибо всем!

3 года назад