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https://www.duolingo.com/profile/sebsztianforero

a day at work

well, hy my friend today i wake up at 11:30 am i saw my friend ramiro a litlle bit boring in the restaurant so i invite him a beer while we talk abouts the world cup soccer,next arrive four friends very specials and they wanna eat seafood dishes and i prepare someones for them. i am chef from colombia and i here since three months ego,has been a amaizing expirience,i have been to de oportunity to learn about of caribbean food is so delicius and can i practice english too,becouse for my carrear its very important,so i starte the doulingo curse aand write that i hope you can help me if i have wrons. thank you so much

June 15, 2015

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https://www.duolingo.com/profile/Lrtward

Well, hi my friend. Today I woke up at 11:30 am I saw my friend Ramiro. It was a litlle bit boring in the restaurant so I invited him to have (or to drink) a beer while we talked about the world cup (or "while we talked about soccer", but not "while we talked about the world cup soccer"). Next four very special friends arrived and they wanted to eat seafood dishes. I prepared some for them. I am a chef from Colombia and I have been here for three months. It has been an amazing experience. I have had the oportunity to learn about Caribbean food. It is so delicious and I can practice English too. It's very important for my career, so I started the Duolingo course and wrote this. I hope you can help me if I have errors. Thank you so much.

That was a very good effort!! Most of the changes I made were just capitalizing "I" and the first letter of sentences. En inglés la palabra "I" (yo) es siempre mayúsculo. Tambien las frases empiezan con mayúsculo. ¡Bien hecho!

June 15, 2015

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/writchie4

A couple more:

Well, hi my friend. Today I woke up at 11:30 am. I saw my friend Ramiro. It was a little bit boring in the restaurant so I invited him to have (or to drink) a beer while we talked about the World Cup (or "while we talked about soccer", but not "while we talked about the world cup soccer"). Next four very special friends arrived and they wanted to eat seafood dishes. I prepared some for them. I am a chef from Colombia and I have been here for three months. It has been an amazing experience. I have had the opportunity to learn about Caribbean food. It is so delicious and I can practice English too. It's very important for my career, so I started the Duolingo course and wrote this. I hope you can help me if I have errors. Thank you so much.

June 16, 2015

https://www.duolingo.com/profile/sebsztianforero

hi lrtward thank you so much god job i will make the corrections.where are you from?

June 16, 2015
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