Could someone help me with Esperanto corrections?

I am working through the Duolingo course here, as well as one of the courses that one of the users in these discussion boards recommended. I have posted my entries on Lang-8, and I was wondering if any advanced Esperantistoj could help me with catching any mistakes I may have made.

Anticipe dankon!

June 22, 2015


You should totally join in the Lingots for Stories weekly thing! We correct each other's writing and it is awesome!

June 23, 2015

Great job with that advertising, Aietra. You should be our PR person thing! ;) throws some lingots Aietra's way looking like some super rich dude

June 23, 2015

N'awwww, thank you! ^_^ Well, what's not to advertise - it's awesome! :D And the more people there are playing, the cooler it is, seeing all those different little stories in different languages. C:

June 24, 2015

And done one lot of corrections for you!

EDIT: Two lots.

EDIT II: Done all the ones that hadn't already been checked! Nice work!

June 23, 2015
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